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| English: "The Snake in the Grass or Satan Transform'd to an Angel of Light." At the sides are a Puritan and a Covenanter above an author writing. Courtesy of the British Museum. (Photo credit: Wikipedia) |
I think my draft was okay, although my thesis was not. I went with: The information revealed about Quill's father in Guardians of the Galaxy adds up to him being an angel rather than just another nonhuman. I don't think I really made that point.
I had to make a list of everything that is said about him in the film, and in the draft I basically used the list, except for the material that was in my scene. The point of this was to include the info without saying too much about all of the other scenes, because I didn't want to give the impression that I was analyzing those scenes (something forbidden in the instructions). I'll find out if this is a problem at my conference with the prof next Monday, when I also hope to get some help with my thesis.
