
But still, this has been so much more work than I ever would have expected. I have never revised anything as much as I have this paper, and I never completely shifted a paper's main point before. If I've learned anything that's super important about research, it's to really think things through from the very beginning. I should have done more of that thinking on paper, too, so that I could have gone over that stuff again and again. It probably would have saved me a lot of time later on.
Here's something I might have used if it had been published more than 5 days ago: